ext_6994 ([identity profile] jackycomelately.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] rusty_armour 2009-10-18 11:36 pm (UTC)

Awwwwww! And, they all lived happily ever after :):):):)

Nice that it's a love story for two couples: one new and one in process. I really like that you added a scene with the mother--very touching.

Brenna Isobel McKay is a very pretty name!

I'm with the border guard! I don't watch Gray's either!

"Oh Rodney!" Heeeeeee!

Favourite line:

"To O’Neill’s chagrin, Rodney’s head fell on his shoulder."

Also Rodney eating his Smarties! Heeee! And, McNeil wanting to play street hockey!

Once again, I love your footnotes! Particularly the beer link!

I'm going to miss getting new parts! Although I'm very excited by your upcoming plans!

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