Thank you very much for taking the time to read the whole story and provide such generous feedback, mific! :-D I'm glad you were able to read the fic from beginning to end without having to wait for various installments to be posted.
I'm extremely happy that you thought the voices worked and the mpreg story was believable...or as believable as an mpreg story can be. *g*
It's great to know that you thought there was a good mix of plot, humour and characterization. At times, I felt like I was juggling quite a few balls in the air, so it's reassuring to hear that everything seemed to blend together okay. I was also kind of nervous about integrating those flashbacks for the McShep backstory, not to mention incorporating Andrew's hockey obsession and a character as flamboyant as Jamie. Again, I'm thrilled that all of these things worked for you. :-D
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I'm extremely happy that you thought the voices worked and the mpreg story was believable...or as believable as an mpreg story can be. *g*
It's great to know that you thought there was a good mix of plot, humour and characterization. At times, I felt like I was juggling quite a few balls in the air, so it's reassuring to hear that everything seemed to blend together okay. I was also kind of nervous about integrating those flashbacks for the McShep backstory, not to mention incorporating Andrew's hockey obsession and a character as flamboyant as Jamie. Again, I'm thrilled that all of these things worked for you. :-D