>>>Then Connor’s lips were parting, and the words Lester wanted to speak were flooding from his mouth.<<<
I really like this characterization. Connor can be overly naive at times, but his ultimate charm comes from his openness and compassion. He knows he shouldn't be revealing the secret, but he can't stop himself from giving Emma the answers she needs to make sense of what's happening.
Thank you very much, pyrateanny! I wasn't sure how readers would react to Connor revealing everything, but it seemed like something he would do if he thought it would help Emma. In any case, I'm happy the characterization worked for you! :-)
Hmmm... lots of sticky complications now. I wonder how Human!Lester will deal with the aftermath in his family life (assuming he does get his old body back).
That's a really good question. I wish I knew... *g* Okay, I do have the rest of the story planned out in my head. Of course, details can change when you go to write certain scenes, so I may end up being surprised as well.
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I really like this characterization. Connor can be overly naive at times, but his ultimate charm comes from his openness and compassion. He knows he shouldn't be revealing the secret, but he can't stop himself from giving Emma the answers she needs to make sense of what's happening.
Thank you very much,
Hmmm... lots of sticky complications now. I wonder how Human!Lester will deal with the aftermath in his family life (assuming he does get his old body back).
That's a really good question. I wish I knew... *g* Okay, I do have the rest of the story planned out in my head. Of course, details can change when you go to write certain scenes, so I may end up being surprised as well.