ext_63596 ([identity profile] rusty-armour.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] rusty_armour 2010-09-22 11:22 am (UTC)

Hi again. I just realized that Jenny's line about the quarry being female makes absolutely no sense because it's not something she should know. I've changed the line slightly to reflect this. I also changed "closets" to "cupboards" in the second part as a bit of self Brit-picking. *g*


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