Date: 2013-09-25 06:33 pm (UTC)
Feedback on Part II—the hilarity continues!

"It was then I pointed out that I would sustain little if any damage from such a plunge as I am composed almost entirely of foam, felt and fabric."

I bow before your ability to alliterate! That is brilliant!

rusty_armour rolled her eyes. “It’s not like that. I felt so guilty after Reed’s nervous collapse that I tucked him in my bed. I told the Queen she was opening a new hospital ward. I think she bought it.”

I howled!

“If I refuse to comply with her wishes, I will be forced to participate in a ménage à trois with Sherlock Bear and Snoopy Sherlock – an event, I might add, which would be documented in dozens of photographs. My reputation would be ruined, my character irredeemably stained. The repercussions to my career – ”

You remembered my love of noncon! My kinky heart thanks you!

Oh my god the photograph! How long did it take you to pose all three of them like that?

“Huh? What? WHERE?” rusty_armour rushed around her apartment until she found Lester standing on the kitchen table. Her eyes narrowed suspiciously. “Where did you get that?”

I love this paragraph! Answering the call of chocolate!

Reed is still clutching the flag even in bed! Too too funny!

Hello Spike! Nice to see you even if you have terrible tastes in judging stories! Of course we've heard his poetry. It would probably be a bad thing if he like it!

Snape shook his head sharply. “No, no, I must contradict you. I’d say it was a brilliant piece of post-modernist humour that provides insight into – ”

I'd say that clearly Snape has the best survival instincts, but canon suggests otherwise :( :( :( Okay, now I've made myself sad.

Psycho rusty_armour!!! That's a damn impressive looking bread knife! Whole wheat loaves quiver in their pans! Come to think of it, it probably would be pretty effective against the plushies!

In short, I loved it! Apologies for the long delay responding to both parts. I had fully intended to do the second part last night, but I basically collapsed in a pile of exhausted nerves. I was Reed without the Queen and a flag!
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